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POETRY PRESCRIPTION: CONSONANCE

12/6/2022

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I’m back with my series of blog posts about the use of poetic devices in picture book writing. We use poetic devices to enhance our written work and create a deeper connection for our reader.
 
Today, we’ll look at the poetic device: Consonance

     
Consonance is a repetition of similar sounds, especially consonants in close proximity. (Often, the vowel sounds may differ.) Again, like the devices alliteration and assonance, this:
  • heightens the relationship between words
  • adds a musical quality
  • captures a certain mood through sound
In my poetry collection, THE SUPERLATIVE A. LINCOLN: Poems About Our 16th President (Illustrated by Dave Szalay), I use this poetic device in a poem. “Best Wrestler”  shares the story of  Abe’s frontier wrestling days when he was a young man racking up a string of top finishes against opponents.
 
Act rough and tough. Then call their bluff.
Look fierce and frown. Then throw ‘em down.

 
Five repeated “f” sounds in just a few short lines lend a gruffness when read aloud. The mood is firmly established in this poem about a public wrestling match and squaring off against your opponent.
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Fellow Rhyme Doctor Patricia Toht employs consonance effectively in her picture book,
DRESS LIKE A GIRL (illustrated by Lorian Tu-Dean). Notice how the crisp “t” sound  is played up in these lines: 
 
Toting some trinkets? Deep pockets hold all.
Grab your white lab coat. The doctor’s on call.

 
In this couplet, the “t” sound is used eight different  times to lend a pronounced, sharper sound to the stanza. This crisply calls attention to the subject matter -- the medical career aspirations and clothing worn by characters in the spread. 
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Rhyme Doctor Michelle Schaub uses consonance  in the opening of her poem, “My Mother’s Button Box” in the poetry collection,  
FINDING TREASURE: A Collection of Collections (illustrated by Carmen Saldana).
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Check out the five repeating “l” sounds which add a lilting, musical quality to the opening line:
 
Shiny ones of shell and glass,
Pearly circles, swirls of brass.


   
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Can you find a way to use consonance to create a desired mood in your work-in-progress?  
I challenge you to give it a try. See you next time.
Happy writing!
 
by Eileen Meyer, Rhyme Doctor
 
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